story board ideas

i have started to generate ideas that i have loosely storyboarded in my sketch book for what might happen in my animation.

1. may first idea is to have a single clueless police officer stood on his own then having a group of lads that eventual move towards the police officer and it goes black. then it shows the police officers face and then zooms out to show him tied up over a fire with all the lads huddled round shouting at him.

2. my second idea is very similar. the only difference is that the police officer is unaware of the lad until they materialise before him through the darkness.